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Who doesn't love a soundtrack? As a writer, soundtracks stir the creative juices in my imagination. So how could I pass up the opportunity to blog about a soundtrack giveaway?

Soundtrack Giveaway 2011 | the Ink Slinger


So yes: most exciting!
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This was not originally written for the 100 Theme challenge, however it fitted point four, and I realized it would work well with it.

Point #4: Rivals

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The Darkness and the Light
By BushMaid
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She watched him from a distance; her thoughts knotting into a tangled mass as she tried to interpret what she saw in the man. Pondering... her mind attempted to envelope his character; to comprehend what it was about him that made him the way he was. How she wished she could unravel the confusion that clouded his soul, so that she could gaze into it and understand.

Such darkness... at first glance, one would not know it existed in him. On the outside he smiled, he laughed; he seemed happy. His life was a righteous one: he loved God, family, and revelled in hard work. He was highly creative, bringing his own uniqueness and style to everything he touched. He genuinely cared for people; had many friends who looked up to him. He was one of those people you meet and take an instant liking to. How did the darkness find room to exist? She thought to herself. Where had it come from?

She didn’t know him. Not really. The man was merely an acquaintance; someone she talked to now and then. But she had caught a glimpse of his life. He had a wisdom that inspired not only her, but the people around him: one would always go to him with deep questions or to ask his advice on various things. And so talented! He threw himself into everything he was passionate about and always pulled them off in a spectacular fashion. He was a man to be admired for his achievements and good character.

And yet... she wasn’t sure why, but she sensed a darkness in him. It was like a black ink that threatened to permeate his life. It was mostly hidden from view, but upon observance, you would begin to see telltale trickles that crept silently into his life; staining things that he touched with its abysmal blackness. It often revealed itself through his creativity; artistic expressions that delved into dark and unbidden places... places of violent horrors and deep emotional pain. Gore and blood; heart-wrenching pain and soul-tearing anguish... all described in such vivid colour that it made one wince in empathy.

This story exceeded my 1,000 word count goal by about 200 words, but I couldn't make it any shorter. This isn't a favourite story of mine, but it's the best I could come up with for point 3 in the 100 theme challenge.

Point #3: Making History

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Not the Enemy
By BushMaid
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Location: Somewhere east of Tel Aviv, Israel
Time: 0530 hours
Mission: Destroy an enemy ammunition dump... at all costs.


The desecrated setting looked to have come from the pages of ancient history. Proud stone and adobe buildings, neat gardens, and narrow streets had been reduced to little more than ruins and rubble. Shepherds had probably driven their sheep to market down this lane. Now a tangle of broken thatch and rubble choked the street, making the lane impassable. Where a woman might have hung her brightly coloured rugs out of that window to beat the dust from them, now the roofless building’s single window looked like the haunted eye of something dead. Everything was silent but for the occasional rattle of a falling stone.

Could this be the kind of scene the Israelites had wrought on enemy cities during the Bible days? Abe wondered briefly.

The US military sergeant wiped the dripping sweat from his upper lip before returning his hand to the trigger of his machine gun. His left hand rubbed the safety switch of his weapon self-consciously. He knew that this unnatural silence was not right. He felt it in his bones. The many years of war he had lived through and his intense military training told him that there was someone out there... Or more than one someone...

This is a photomanipulation I did based on Psalm 45: 10&11.


Can also be viewed here.
I randomly sat down the other day to draw a picture. I decided to draw a chess piece. I've no idea why. I have always been intrigued by the quote from The Count of Monte Cristo where Edmond says, "King's to you, Fernand" so I guess this is another reason why I ended up drawing it.

The perspective didn't turn out quite right, but I left it. Also, the cross's shadow isn't correct either, but I wasn't game enough to change it.

I ended up finding a Bible verse that suited, so I was very pleased about that! Credit to the shadow and the drawing medium goes to Jacob for his help and the loan of his graphite pencils. :D


Can also be viewed here.
Celebrating -

ten fun-filled months of blogging, 

twenty-eight awesome followers,

three hundred and ninety-four pages of comments,

first writing competition,

one page's high of ninety-two views,

one hundred and sixty-five referrals from HolyWorlds,

eighty-five people who were brave enough to view my "about" page,

fifteen hundred and two page views from Firefox users,

eleven hundred and fifty-eight from Internet Explorer users,

seven hundred and sixty from Chrome users,

three thousand, two hundred and sixty-one from Windows users,

five hundred and fifteen from Macintosh users,

two from Samsung users,

two thousand, seven hundred and fifty-one page views from the USA,

seven hundred and ninety-three page views from Australia,

forty-eight page views from the UK,

seven page views from Denmark,
(I don't know anyone who lives in Denmark)

and 

100 blog posts.

Thankyou to all my wonderful readers! You make blogging worth it. :D

A bump in the road,
I happened to trip.
Seeming so subtle,
But it made me slip.

A difference so slight
I just didn't see -
Gigantic mistake
It happened to be.

To turn back the time!
To take the move back.
The bump did avoid,
The trip did retrack.

The tears that I shed,
Achieve not a thing.
All that I can do
Is plead to the King.

That He can make right
The wrong that I've done:
Problem against me
Somehow be won.

But trusting in Him
Is all I can do.
I cling to this hope, 
And pray that it's true.

That what has been done
Can be as it should;
That all this through God
Can work out for good.
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Set Apart
By BushMaid
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I'm different: I'm not like the rest.
I don't fit in, I'm strange at best.

A square peg forced in a round hole,
I do not fit: a lonely soul.

Though both a faith and God we share,
I can't see Him reflected there.

You love the world, and go its ways -
In how you dress, and spend your days.

At church I see your smiling face - 
My friend, where's your eternal place?

You live your life like it's your own,
With weeds, your heart is overgrown.

Hypocritical double life,
You cannot see it leads to strife.

On all sides I'm surrounded by
So called "Christians" living a lie.

I want to tell you what is true -
Oh help me God! What can I do?

So friendless and alone I feel,
I know of none who share my zeal.

I stand alone, so brave and strong,
But strength grows weak as time grows long.

My searching eyes, fatigued, grow dim:
I'm desperate to see more of Him.

For someone else who feels the same!
Who wants to learn more of His name.

For some who travel the same road,
To share the journey; share the load. 

Who lives the light that they have found,
Who show God's love in sight and sound.

Who more like Jesus want to grow,
Not stooping to the world so low.

To shun the tempting lusts of earth,
And reach for things of greater worth.

To flee from evil's tempting claws,
And strive to follow all God's laws.

To seek His truth and shine His light:
I wish for this with all my might.

Can it be I'm the only one,
Who wants to be more like His Son?

No, in my heart, I know there's more
Who've entered through Salvation's door;

Who strive for good along with me,
Though where they are, I cannot see.

Knowing that I'm not alone,
As I journey towards His Throne,

He walks with me; my Dearest Friend,
Who'll see me to the very end.

The Lord my God is always there -
My true Companion everywhere.

For it is He who guides my feet;
God's in control of whom I meet.

So, though alone I seem today,
My God is near me, all the way.
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If you follow the highway up the coast of NSW Australia towards Queensland, following the chain of beach cities, and you happen to take a certain exit left at some point...

If you then travel rather aimlessly along this road you've turned onto, you will eventually come to a small inconspicuous turn-off that, if you blinked at that instant or looked out the opposite window, you would have missed it altogether.

However: if you were an observant driver, and were paying close attention to the tiny roads that suddenly veer off the main-way and disappear into thick scrub, and you happened to slow the car and move onto this unassuming road, you would find, over a rickety white bridge spanning a salt water river, and to the left hidden behind trees and bushes, a little yellow house.

And this little yellow house... is paradise.

When we go on holidays, we always go up to this little yellow house in this tiny unknown town on the coast. It's a very special house. It first belonged to my grandparents, and my Mum and Dad have been going on holidays there since they were Jacob's and my age. This little town has a very special place in our hearts, and my siblings and I consider it a second home, since we have been visiting it for our whole lives.

Upon our arriving, we usually contrive some form of bucket brigade, emptying the trailer of bags and boxes and dragging them inside the house. All the food from the esky is packed into the fridge, and all the clothing bags and luggage - quite literally - is chucked into the waiting arms of whichever sibling happens to be standing in the doorway. In this unorthodox manner of unpacking, it doesn't take long until the job is entirely finished and everything is in its rightful place.

Ever since I have been introduced to the blogging world, I have come across the most amazing people who run the most amazing blogs. They are Godly, uplifting, inspiring, encouraging, challenging, laugh-inducing, intriguingly written, and the many articles, thoughts, and opinions they share have encouraged me greatly. So today I felt that I should do a blog post for a few of the ones that have made a great impression on me.

Here they are:

Sir Emeth Mimetes
Sir Emeth's blog has inspired and challenged me in so many countless ways. Jay's thought-provoking articles on various aspects of Godly living, life and writing are challenging and enlightening at the same time. No matter what he writes about, I can always take something valuable away from his wisdom-filled blog posts.

Aubrey Hansen
My dear friend Philly's blog is the most delightful place! Her well-written, candid articles on everything from world building to common traits in Disney princesses are uplifting and inspiring in every way. Philly shares her talent in her Godly writing, and whether it is a short story, script or poem, her works are a joy to read!

Thine is The Kingdom
Gabriel's blog is fantastic. It is a place of detailed and concise movie reviews, book reviews, and awe-inspiring music. Gabriel shares his incredible musical talent, along with his thoughts on different Scripture studies that both encourage and challenge. I thoroughly enjoy reading Gabriel's masterful posts.

Into the Book
Looking for a place that has honest, Godly reviews for books for the Christian reader? Look no further. When I found this blog, I was gobsmacked by it's awesomeness. Andrew has brought together an incredible team of book reviewers that put forth perfect quality in every review. If a book is recommended here, I would definitely trust the recommendation. I love this blog!

God's Daughter
Miss Raquel's blog follows her journey through life as a daughter of the King. Her music and movie reviews, reflections, thoughts, articles, and quotes have been inspiring and encouraging to me since I have known her. Her joy in following the Lord, and His light within her, shines through every blog post. Her blog is always a joy to visit.


There are so many other blogs that I have the pleasure of following, but for now, I will end here. Thankyou to you all, for sharing such Godly quality with the world! You are bright lights for Him, and you have encouraged me very much. I appreciate your blogs, and am very grateful for the time you spend writing for them. God bless you all!
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These Are the Hands
By BushMaid
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Here are the hands, your father's hands,
For you, the ground they tilled.
Hands that cradled, spanked, and laboured
So your life might be filled.

Here are the hands, your mother's hands,
That cherished you from birth.
Hands that bandaged, soothed, and nurtured,
So you might know your worth.

Here are the hands, your brother's hands,
That followed all your laws.
Hands that pestered, played, created,
So you might know your flaws.

Here are the hands, your sister's hands,
That pointed here and there.
Hands that ordered, reached, applauded,
So you might know she cares.

Here are the hands, your good friend's hands,
That always did the same.
Hands that copied, mimed and mimicked,
So you might learn their game.

Here are some hands, some special hands,
So scarred and hurt they've been!
Hands so tortured, nailed, and wounded,
None like you've ever seen.

These are the hands, beloved hands,
That bore the pain for you.
Hands that doctored, prayed and gentled,
So you might know what's true.

Here are my hands, my own two hands,
That look so young and small.
But they accept the gift God gave:
The price He paid for all.
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...my best friend, sidekick, musical partner, comrade in arms: my brother Jacob! I have finally persuaded one of our computers and Jacob to sit down with me and get a recording of him playing the guitar like a pro. I have been itching for the chance to show off his incredible guitar skills (albeit, enviously!) so I am pleased to announce this is he: playing Old Town by the one and only Tommy Emmanuel.

Note: this is not a double recording - both bass and melody are played at the same time.

Amazing the friends I've made through the wonders of the internet! Christian sisters and brothers I never knew I had. Such a blessing.

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Distant Friends
By BushMaid
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Another soul, another face,
Spanning across the time and space.

Between them a great distance lies,
With written words their only ties.

On different sides of earth they are,
Through words so near, and yet so far.

Computer screen becomes a link,
Sending thoughts in less than a blink.

A soul and face I do not know
Except for words my screen will show.

Laughing - smiling - I come to see
How wonderful these folks must be.

Gradually I learn their ways,
And after quite a many days,

The simple words become much more,
As though we’re talking through a door.

Though not a face I’d recognize,
Their happy voices; smiling eyes:

I can imagine in my head,
Uniqueness in each word that’s said.

With these words my computer sends,
I count these people as my friends.

Which often causes me despair,
For all the times I can’t be there:

To offer them a tight embrace,
A gentle touch, or smiling face;

To help their pain, their grief or tears,
To bear their worries, thoughts or fears.

I’m stranded oh so far away,
With only simple words to say.

Computer screen my only sign
That everyone is doing fine.

The worries try to eat at me,
“How are they when I cannot see?”

And in this thing I know I must
Learn to lean on the God I trust.

For He is everywhere, I know.
In every place that I can’t go.

So in His hands I place my friends,
From every place on earthly ends.

I know someday we all will meet,
A time I know will be most sweet.

But up till then, God be with you,
And someday I will meet you too.

God loves you more than words could say,
For this I’m grateful for each day.

Praying across the time and space,
Until the day we see His face.
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Memorizing Scripture is important, and I must say I have not paid as much heed to it as I should have. However lying in bed one night not long ago, and dreaming up story plots in my mind reminded me of just how important it is. What if your memory was all that you had?

I had woken up in a cold empty house. The colour was greyscale; like the disturbing parts of a movie where the town/house is abandoned, pieces of newspaper blown across the empty landscape, posters faded and torn, shutters flapping eerily in the ghostly breeze. I remember waking up out of my bed, panicked. For some reason, I ran across the room to where a computer sat, veiled with dust. With shaking hands, and heart beating hard against my ribs, I turned on the computer and waited for it to load. As I sat there, the computer screen suddenly flashed to life, and automatically began compiling a list. I began reading down the column, and I realized it was listing all the people I knew online. A sense of horror made me jerk back in my chair, as next to each name, a red word flashed: deceased.

I leaped from the computer chair, knocking it over. Fear clutching at my throat, it's chill in my heart. I rushed for the door and out into the street. I couldn't find a living soul, no matter how many houses and shops I ran into. It was as though every single person I knew had vanished into thin air. I ran and ran, but I could find no one. I was completely and utterly alone.

Somehow I ended up standing on a street corning, hugging my Bible. It was digging into my ribs painfully, I was holding it so tight. My mind was numbed, and the pain of the edge of the Bible kept throbbing as I clutched it. Suddenly the pain slackened, and I looked down. The breeze that had been tossing the newspaper about had caught my Bible, and as I watched with ever increasing horror, my Bible began to dissolve. No matter how hard I hung onto it, my Bible began to crumble in my hands, turning to ash that the wind bore away mercilessly. The heartless whipping wind eventually whisked the last of the ash from my hands, and my arms were empty. I did not even have the comfort of Scripture to help me through this horrific disaster.

As I watched the last of the ash take to the overcast sky, my fear increased. I could not remember a single verse. All I had left was God to cling to, yet I could not recall a single promise in His Word. I had neglected to memorize it whilst I had it, and now it was gone. All that I would have had could have been inside my mind, but I did not take heed. I did not keep His Words constantly before my eyes. And now I no longer had a link to my Father in heaven. I was lost. Completely lost and alone.

The fear was something so tangible I felt it was suffocating. No, it was consuming me: I was turning to ash; I could feel the fear tearing at my very soul as I gasped...

...and woke up. I rolled over in bed; my Bible was on my bedside table. Never had it's black leather cover looked so inviting. As I turned on my lamp, the golden words "Holy Bible" leaped out at me, beckoning. I took it in my hands, opening it. And with thankfulness in my heart...

...I began to read.

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Blessings Overflow
By BushMaid
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No words my tongue can find to voice,
No thoughts that I can say;
My heart so full I can't keep still -
God's praise I must display.

My cup so filled, it overflows - 
Such joy I can't believe.
These blessings great that fill my life,
I dared not hope receive.

Unworthiness! My soul cries out,
Of all that You bestow.
How is it that You think of me,
So way down here below?

Your glory I can't comprehend,
Your grace: can't bear to see:
Such mercy I can't understand
You pour out onto me.

There's no way I could find the words
Of gratefulness to say.
So on my knees I praise You, Lord,
For what You give this day.
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I am the alone one. The one who is sitting in the far corner of the cafe with no one else. I am the girl who hides her world behind her sunglasses. I am the one who keeps her head down as she walks the streets. I am the one your gaze passes over as you glance around a crowded room. I am alone in my own world. No one ever sees me. Nobody notices me. I am silent. I am the invisible one.

I pull my dark jacket closer, and shift on my chair. My clothes are different. My hair is different. All my looks are different. I am the plain one. The one who sticks out, and yet goes unnoticed. I am not the same as everyone else. Yet everyone else all seem the same. They are different, but I am more so. I am the odd one.

From the safety of my dark glasses, I watch. I observe. I listen. I am the ignored one as people mill around me, and as I am ignored, they are watched. Watched by the very one they don’t even bother to see. People are curious beings, and yet they frighten me. Their bold clothes, their proud looks, and their hurrying steps as they rush about their perfect lives; all of them so much the same, yet all of them so different. So many numbers, but all unique. They are strange ones.

I study their faces from behind my glasses so they cannot detect my scrutiny. My mind ponders their features. Why does that person frown so? Is he worried? Frustrated? What about that lady - why does she smile so cryptically? Does she know a secret? Is she pleased about something? My gaze jumps to each new passing face and my mind evaluates them at high speeds. So many people, but one me. The watchful one.

A lone person meets my probing eyes, and my heart leaps. Do they know me? Have they guessed my game? Why do they look at me so? Before I can panic, they break into a smile and greet a person coming their way. I relax. It was not me. How could it have been me? I am nobody, I tell myself. The unknown one.

I see a girl my age get up and leave her table, slinging her handbag over her shoulder. What if for a moment I could swap my life for hers: that I would leave the cafe in her shoes, walking her life? Where would I be going? Would I have a home, or a family? Would I be meeting friends I didn’t have, or going to a school I didn’t know? Would she like sitting as I am: watching time flow past in a river of different faces? No, I say to myself. She would not. She would not be content with my lot: the solitary one.

At last I bring myself to leave the safety of my unshared table; the safe mask of my sunglasses firmly in place, protecting my eyes from the curious glances of the strange people I would mingle with. With a confidence I don’t feel, I hold my bag close to my side and begin walking through the mall, my eyes darting here and there at the multitude of passing faces. All of them: same, but different. None of them me. How could they be? I am the only one. And as I walk through the crowd, though I am surrounded by my fellow people, I am alone. Watchful, invisible, silent, unknown - I am the alone one.
We went to our town's show this weekend. (Australian equivalent to American fairs) My siblings and I have been going to the yearly show for as long as we can all remember, and our parents went as children before us! I love traditions. There is so much to see and do there, and it's very exciting!

The scent of showground food lingers in the air the second you step out of the car mixed with the smell of horses and cattle. Dust kicks up around your feet as you walk across the well trodden grass. People wander past carrying huge stuffed animals from the side ally games. Hot dog stands are dime a dozen, and music peals out of every booth. The loudspeaker blares with the sound of the announcer's voice, heralding the next event. Rides spin in crazy circles, and the screams of their riders' fill the air with excitement. It's enough to bring a grin to your face as you gaze delightedly at the multitude of sights.

We went to the pavilion first where all the art, cooking and craft exhibits were. A few of our friends won prizes for their cooking. Some of the cakes were spectacular! Even had a cake that looked like my favourite hat. I of course made a beeline for the art corner. The arts have dwindled over the years, but there were still some very beautiful pieces. Art judges make rather peculiar choices in winners, so I didn't really agree with their choices, but I loved looking at the various works and their mediums. As a pencil drawer myself, I can very much appreciate a painting since I find it so difficult. There were some gorgeous photography too. I must remind myself to enter some pieces next year... like I tell myself every year!

Here's a photomanipulation I did during some spare time on a verse I found intriguing.


You can also see it in the HolyWorlds Art Gallery. =)
Some thoughts on paper. A late night and a heavy heart coupled with a blank notebook page creates things.

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My Burden
By BushMaid
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Lashing words that wound like darts,
Bruising looks and crushing hearts.

Bitter truths and hurtful plies,
Burdened souls and sorrowed eyes.

Cutting thoughts and biting acts,
Losing sight of friendship pacts.

Anger and hostility
No thought for humility. 

Sleepless nights of anguished tears,
Mourning for their hurting peers.

Trying to get through each day:
Aching heart - must stop and pray.

Stressful mind and worried frown,
Quivering lips with eyes cast down.

All afraid to show their face;
Scared to show each other grace.

Mighty Hand and Words of Life,
One I know can end this strife.

On my knees I wage a war - 
Knocking at my Master's door.

Ready with my Sword of Prayer,
I know God is working there.

Healing wounds that once did bleed,
Being all the help they need.

Mending hearts and lifting souls;
Fixing breaks and filling holes.

Look to Jesus and you'll see,
How a servant's heart should be.

Trusting Him with all my cares,
Knowing that He hears my prayers.

Prayers for hearts of purity,
Prayers for minds of unity.

Prayers for joy and prayers for peace;
Prayers that all discord would cease.
~

Psalm 133:1, Romans 15:5
Ok, so I guess I should probably explain that incomprehensible title. I am excited! Why? Because a very good friend of mine from HolyWorlds is about to publish her first book! I had the great honour and pleasure of being a test reader for Aubrey Hansen's book, "Red Rain" which is due to release tomorrow.


And it gets better! I have pre-ordered a signed copy! *cue the happy spazzy dance all the way around the room*

So! This is only a short post, but if you would like to learn more about this wonderful book and its awesome author, head on over to her blog, and visit the "Red Rain" page!
Second story in the 100 Theme Challenge. 98 to go...

Word #2: Complicated

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Behind Bars
By BushMaid
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A figure crouched in the dark shadows of the building. Though the streetlights lit up most of the street, their light did not reach him in the alleyway, where the night held a multitude of secrets. Dressed completely in black, he watched the building across the street, his eyes darting about nervously. He let his fingers run over the cold metal of the pistol he carried, trying to calm his shaking hands. This was his first assignment, and he was afraid. He had never done this before, and he hoped everything would go smoothly. He eyed his watch, also hoping that his teammates would turn up soon.

The gravel of the nearby sidewalk was crunched underfoot, and the figure pinned himself against the wall, shrinking away from the light at the end of the street. He held his breath as an ordinary business man made his way past, unaware of him watching. Just as the young man relaxed, a hand suddenly shot out of the blackness and clamped over his mouth. Fear and panic flooding his mind, his knees sagged and he slid down the wall. Discovered!

A deep chuckled brought him to his senses, and the second figure pulled down his balaclava revealing a set of gleaming white teeth, grinning devilishly.

“Scare you, Joe?” His smug voice asked.

Joe tore the hand away from his mouth contemptuously. “Mick, you fool!” He rasped out. “I could have shot you!”

Mick continued to chuckle as he kicked a metal object on the ground. “It would have been difficult without your gun.” He flashed another grin at Joe’s discomfort.

Snatching up the gun scowling, Joe wiped the water from the barrel before concealing it inside his jacket. “Where’s Clive? Why isn’t he here?”

“He’ll get here when he gets here,” Mick answered, serious now as he pulled the balaclava back up over his face. He produced a similar pistol and, withdrawing a cylindrical tube from his pocket, Mick proceeded to screw the silencer on the end of the stubby barrelled automatic.


Here is the second runner up story from the story competition. Congratulations, Ashley! Well done!

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Dance
By Ashley M.
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“It’s a shame you have to stand here alone like this.”

The young woman did not turn to see who was addressing her, but kept her eyes on her sister as she spun gracefully.

“It would truly be a shame if I were to embarrass myself by doing anything else.”

“Then I suppose you would turn me down if I were to ask you to dance with me.”

At this she turned, one eyebrow raised. “Well you’re certainly not shy. And why, might I ask, would I accept such an offer from a perfect stranger?”

He laughed. “That I cannot answer.”

She smiled slightly as she turned her attention to her sister once more. “Sarah would be disappointed if she learned I've stood watching all evening.” She studied her sister’s joyous expression for a moment before turning back to the young man beside her.

“I suppose I couldn’t turn you down if you were to ask.”

His blue eyes twinkled as he bowed slightly, smiling. “May I?”

She nodded, and they walked out into the room.

The young woman found herself dancing not nearly as badly as she had feared. She stumbled once or twice, but the tall, smiling stranger before her didn't seem to mind.

“So what brings you here? I can’t say that I have seen you before.”

“An old friend,” the man replied. “I don’t think you would know him. I haven’t seen him in years, but he invited me here for a visit. Unfortunately I must depart tomorrow.”

“A friend you say? But I know nearly everyone around. I would have thought we would have been properly introduced.”

“He’s not one for introductions. I don’t think you’d like him very well anyway.”

“Why do you say that?”

“Most people don’t really want him around. I must admit, I wasn’t sure how to handle him at first. I thought he would drive me mad. But you learn to see the good in people. In fact, he has taught me to enjoy life.”

“Sounds like an interesting person.”

“Indeed.”

With the conversation, she had nearly forgotten her dancing, but the temptation to feel self-conscious nagged at her as she saw her sister, beautiful as always.

“Is there a problem?”

“Not really. Only that I’m afraid I may be wasting your time.”

“Quite the opposite. I have enjoyed myself very much this evening. Thank you.”

The music came to an end, and he bowed, then turned to leave.

“You must at least tell me your name before you go.”

He smiled sadly, looking distantly at the night that had fallen. “It matters not. In a week’s time you will have forgotten.” He looked her in the eye as he continued. “You have my gratitude, however little it is worth, Elizabeth. I had hoped this evening would help me to forget, at least for a time, all that is to befall me. Indeed, my last day here has been hard. I am pleased that someone has given out of their time to help a poor soul such as mine.”

She would have questioned his words, had he not bowed again and left before she could make sense of any of it.

“Who was that, Liz?” Sarah stood nearby her younger sister, watching the young man leave.

“That is a very good question.”
~

Here is the first runner up entry of the story competition. Congratulations, Jonathan!

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A Different Kind of Snake
By Jonathan Garner
~*~*~*~

At first Jessica thought the knocking sound was her father’s foot tapping as he played guitar. She smiled as he played. But when he finished the song, she heard the knocking sound again.

Someone was at the door.

Jessica remembered when they used to welcome visitors. Her mom had always been a charming hostess, and now her mom was dead, but that wasn’t the only reason few visitors came to their country home any more.

Her dad put the guitar in its case and went into the hall. When he returned, Jessica felt as cold as the barrel of the shotgun he held. Silently, she followed her dad to the front door, knowing what to do.

Six feet from the door, her dad stopped and raised the shotgun. Jessica walked to the door, and with her hand shaking, turned the dead bolt. As the door swung open, she hid behind it.

She had done this many times before. They never looked to see who was at the door, because the people they were afraid of would look normal, so they wouldn’t be able to tell who was good and who was evil.

All the other times, it had turned out to be someone good. There had been no gunblast. She closed her eyes, praying that this would be like those times.

Then the gunblast came.

She heard a gasp and the sound of a body tumbling off the porch onto the ground. She was too scared to cry. Besides, she was sixteen, a young woman, not a little girl.

“Daddy?” she whispered.

“Close the door and lock it,” he said softly.

She did as she was told.

“Now,” her dad said. “There’s going to be at least one other man around back. You stay here in the hall where there are no windows, and I’ll go see.”

Jessica nodded.

Her dad headed down the hall and out of sight. A moment later, she heard a shotgun blast, followed by several pistol shots, and finally another shotgun blast.

Then silence.

She started slowly down the hall, terror and curiosity getting the best of her. Her dad appeared in the hall in front of her, holding his side, his hand red with blood.

“You’re hurt!” she cried.

“He got me once.” Her dad grimaced. “But I’ll live, if I get treated soon enough. He’s beyond the help of doctors.”

“I’ll call the police and an ambulance.”

“You know we can’t trust the police, at least not until the government has decided whether I’m a hero or a villain. As for an ambulance, the phone’s out. I checked. They must have cut the line.”

“We’ll have to drive to town, then.”

Her dad started to nod, then his face grew pale and he toppled to the floor.

“Daddy!” She ran to him and knelt by his side.

“I’m fine,” he whispered. “Just hurt worse than I thought. I guess I won’t be driving.”

“I can ride Strider to the Williams’ house.”

“No. There might be another man.”

“It’s the only chance. Otherwise you’ll die.”

Her dad sighed. “All right. Just be careful. I’ll go with you outside.”

“But you can’t--”

“I can do whatever it takes to make sure you’re safe.”

Her dad slowly got to his feet and started down the hall, holding the shotgun with one hand and leaning against the wall with the other. Blood dripped onto the ground.

“Let me bandage the wound,” Jessica said.

“No, I’ll do that once you’re gone.”

“But--”

“Oh, just so you know, the papers the government wants are in a secret compartment in the guitar case.”

“I’ll remember that.”

Her dad made it to the back porch. A dead man lay on the ground nearby.

“I’ll cover you,” her dad said. “Be careful.”

Jessica nodded and stepped off the porch, then ran across the yard to the barn. Inside, she quickly saddled Strider, the family’s beloved horse, whom her mom had chosen and named long ago.

As she rode Strider out of the barn, she heard another shotgun blast, and saw a man nearby topple to the ground.

“Go!” her dad cried.

She urged Strider to speed up, and he galloped across the yard and onto the trail that led through the woods to the Williams’ house. Near the end of the three-mile-long trail, she slowed Strider down.

A figure burst out of the woods, and she screamed. But as the figure pointed a gun at her, another figure appeared behind the first and shot him in the back. The other figure was Tom, the Williams’ eighteen-year-old son.

Jessica brought Strider to a halt on the trail.

“I heard the gunshots and knew what they meant,” Tom said. “Then I saw a stranger go through our yard and get on the trail to ambush you.”

Jessica stared at the gun. “Is that your family’s snake-killing revolver?”

“Yeah. I just killed a different kind of snake today.”

“I didn’t want you or your family to get involved in this.”

“I know. But we’re not afraid. We know your dad is doing what’s right by holding the government accountable for what they did. Soon the government will realize they can’t get away with it, and throw a few people in jail. Suddenly your dad will be a hero. If he survives. We keep telling your dad to let us help guard you two. Maybe he’ll listen now.”

“Oh, you know him.” Jessica rolled her eyes. “Anyway, I need to call an ambulance. I just hope this is all over soon.”

“I hope so, too. But until then, our family will stand with yours, and God will watch over you and your dad.”

Jessica nodded. “And the truth about my mom’s death will finally come out.”
~
Announcing the winning entry for the writing competition! Well done, Katie! =D

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Rain
By Katie Daniels
~*~*~*~

The wind sings.
The rain pours around me, but on the grass it is silent and there is only the wind.
The singing wind.
It sings to me of sleep and rest, of peace... a lullaby.

I stand in the rain and listen to the wind sing. I am as wet as the mud I stand in, but I don't care. I close my eyes and let the rain run down my cheeks. The water from the sky hides the water on my face. The rain turns the heaped mound before me into a muddy dip in the ground. The flowers that have been laid on the grave wilt under the onslaught. I welcome the destruction.

I draw a shuddering breath and hold my arms wide, welcoming it. The singing of the wind stirs a part of me that hasn't been touched since the accident. It took hours before the paramedics got there, and we had kept each other alive, talking of everything we were going to do when we were married.

It had been raining all evening. The road was dark and we were giddy and distracted. That was why we didn't see it, why the car had hydroplaned and hit the guard rail. We were both pinned under the car, unable to reach each other. It rained all night. Sometimes we couldn't  hear each other from the drumming on the wreckage.

The firemen came and got us out of the debris. The rain had cleared up so they could work. We were taken away in separate ambulances and I never saw him again. I didn't get to say goodbye. We fought our own battles, alone, afraid, and so far apart. It was a week before I knew anyone around me and nearly a month when they finally told me just how alone I was. It hadn't rained since the accident.

They told me I was lucky to be alive. I had both my legs broken and would have to have therapy to learn to walk again. My parents took me home, and my friends sent me sympathy cards. I worked hard to get better and watched the sky. The sun shone relentlessly and the farmers talked worriedly about drought.

Finally today... I came. I came to say goodbye. The rain is silent, but it is raining. The sky is weeping for me, and finally I can weep with it. And the wind sings my broken heart to sleep.  
~
I am happy to announce, that after a month of reading brilliant entries, umming and arring, much discussion, more reading, more discussion, plenty of thinking, lots of headaches, sleepless nights, (ok, maybe not that far) etc. my dear friend Bek and I are pleased to announce the winners of the writing competition for "The Mystery"!



*Drumroll, if you please...*


First Place
Goes to

~ Katie Daniels ~

for her entry
"Rain"

Congratulations, Katie! Bek and I loved your story. We loved how well you captured the music, and wove such a seamless and beautiful story out of it, that was entirely complete in itself, leaving no loose ends. It was so beautiful and moving, and was a joy to read. Well done!


Second Place
Goes to

~ Jonathan Garner ~

for his entry
"A Different Kind of Snake"

Bravo, Jonathan! Bek and I found your story fascinating; the intrigue and suspense made us want to know more. The writing was gripping, and we felt immediately thrust into the world of the characters from the beginning. It was an exciting read, great work!


Third Place
Goes to

~ Ashley M. ~

for her entry
"Dance"

Congrats, Ashley! Bek and I loved how well you captured the "mystery" of the song in your story. You brought an interesting story to life and it reflected the music's mystery in its ending. It flowed well and was a pleasure to read. Good job!


I'd like to say a very big thankyou to everyone who entered the competition. Your stories were fantastic, and you seriously gave Bek and I a very, very hard time choosing the winners. Thankyou so much for sharing your talents with us! Your stories were a joy to read.


If the winners could email me their mailing addresses to bushmaidATgmailDOTcom I will be able to ship your prizes to you as soon as I get to the post office. =)

I've taken up the 100 theme challenge that was posted by Luke the Mindwielder on HolyWorlds. I'm going to attempt writing a 1,000 word short story for each subject in the list of 100 subjects. Here is my first story for the first word in the 100. This is going to be quite a ride, because I'll be trying to write a 1,000 word story a day. So I will appreciate all the critiquing you're willing to give!

Word #1: Introduction

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Prisoner Freed
By BushMaid
~*~*~*~

I didn’t know her from a bar of soap. In fact, by that time, I had almost forgotten what even a bar of soap looked like. No, I don’t know why she stopped, how she got there, or what gave her the courage to speak to the likes of me; but meeting her changed my life forever.

The grey wall of the building across the alleyway was the same as always. The narrow empty street was dark, devoid of sunlight at any given time of day. Homeless wretches and drunkards would wander by on the odd occasion, but apart from these briefs spurts of activity, the street was as lifeless and dead as my heart within me.

For a time that I had lost count of, I clutched the steel bars of my cell. For another innumerable time, I closed my eyes in grief; my wrongs that had landed me in this prison came back to mock and taunt me again. The silence of my one room world amplified the voices of contempt inside my head; the volume like a roar that threatened to tear my heart in two. I was trapped body, mind and soul, and would stay so for the rest of my life. The thought that I might live to be an old man was more than I could bear, and I groaned aloud through gritted teeth.

All of a sudden, through the shroud of torturous voices that filled my head, I heard soft scuffing footsteps in the distance. Their hesitancy and lightness alerted me to the fact that the approaching person was not one of the alley’s usual stumbling beggars. Willing for any distraction to take my mind off my pain, I pressed my face against the bars and strained my eyes to look towards the end of the street. Eventually something came into view, and the figure standing there made me draw a sharp breath.

She would have only been around eight years old. Her yellow dress that reflected the sun almost made the darkness of the gloomy street seem lighter. Slowly she made her way down the street, hesitant and cautious. As she put one tentative step in front of another, I could see that she was treading carefully so as not to step in the oily puddles. Her tiny feet wore black satiny shoes, and her arms spread from her sides as though she would somehow keep a better distance between herself and the puddles that way. As she drew near to my cell window, I could see her tearstained face more clearly. She had blonde curly hair that framed aqua/green eyes, and her small mouth was turned down studiously as though she had just made up her mind on something. Her entire image reminded me so strongly of the daughter I once had, that the deep remorse swelled within me as a sob in my throat. I coughed, the sound shattering the silence of the street.

The girl gasped, stopped and looked up. By now she was level with my window and I could see down into her pure, guileless eyes.

“Oh, hello,” she breathed.

A poem inspired by my dear friend, Bek.


~*~*~*~
Time Together
By BushMaid
~*~*~*~

A final hug, one last embrace;
A last long look upon your face.
A moment here, the next away:
Now living in another day.

The passing time, a mystery -
A second here, then history.
Lives bump each other here and there,
Our times together are so rare.

Strange, time moves without you here:
It moves for all my friends so dear.
Revolving clock, it spins around - 
Time, it moves: wherever we're found.

Each life a bubble floating by:
Borne on the winds of time, they fly.
Sometimes two worlds become as one - 
Sharing the time under the sun.

These moments brief, we live to see,
Where time contains both you and me.
Though few and far between they seem - 
It does no harm for one to dream.

Though parting always comes with pain,
I know a time will come again;
A time the two of us can share:
And in that place, we'll both be there.
~
~*~*~*~
Long Way Home
By BushMaid
~*~*~*~

I dropped my suitcase on the road, brushing the hair that whipped into my eyes. The track stretched from horizon to horizon, seemingly endless, the breeze creating willy-willy’s in the red dust.  

I sighed. Where was I going? What had come over me when I packed my suitcase and started walking? I looked back over my shoulder; whence I had come. The forest was dark and forbidding. Yet up ahead...

The setting sun shone, the dusky light revealing the way. I would not go back. I would press on to my goal. I picked up my suitcase, and kept walking.

~
UPDATE! I've extended the deadline for the writing competition for one week, so the new deadline is now the 28th of August. Hopefully that will give some of you a bit more time! =D

In case you have heard, and in case you haven't heard, the rumours are true:

BushMaid is holding a writing competition!

Disclaimer: BushMaid has never run a writing competition before, so please bear with her if she makes mistakes on how writing competitions should be run, rules written, and prizes presented, etc. etc. etc. Disclaimer is now over.

Now before you get all excited and start thinking plane tickets to the Sydney Opera House or a holiday in Scottish castle, I regret to inform you the prizes are meager. So if you are not inclined to win a book and a bookmark, you need not feel obliged to enter! Before I detail the exciting (or, not-so-exciting) prospect of what prizes are in store, let's get down to the fun part: The Rules!

The competition is to write a 1,000 word short story that is inspired by a song. Which song? This song. "The Mystery" by Tommy Emmanuel. 


This song has so many facets, twists, turns, and intricacies that it was at the top of my list of song choices for this competition. It's title alone evokes a million story ideas. I'm sure it is more than enough to get all your writerly creative juices flowing!

The two basic rules for this competition are:

1. It must be no more than 1,000 words long, yet it can't be as short as a drabble. (100 words) i.e. longishly short!

2. It must be inspired by this song.

Other than that, you have a free rein for writing; this includes any genre, sub-genre, fantasy elements, etc. Practically anything is allowed, but please keep it G to PG rated. (a needless warning: no bad language or vulgar themes) I would love to see loads of entries, so I have an extra rule:

3. You can submit up to three short stories!

Please email your entries to: bushmaidATgmailDOTcom, putting "Submission: {Title of Story}" in the subject line. (This would be very helpful!)

Now onto the even more fun stuff! Prizes!

First Prize:

The winning story will be published on my blog. Along with that, you will also receive a copy of "A Little Bush Maid" by Mary Grant Bruce. I'm super excited about this one, because if you hadn't noticed, it's my namesake, so you will learn all about the origins of my name! If you've already read it, well yahoo! You have your own copy now! And if you already have your own copy... hold a writing competition! * winks *


You also win a kangaroo leather bookmark signed by me. 


Second Prize:

The first runner up will have their story published on my blog as well. Also a book mark - I think this is normal leather - signed by me, and a postcard. (no picture of)


Third Prize:

Third prize will be published on my blog, and will win a small photomanipulation of their choice made by yours truly.

Note! You may submit up to three stories, but each person who enters is only eligible for one prize.
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So that's about it! Be inspired, be creative, and start writing! I'd love to see what y'all come up with! The competition is open for entries now and the deadline for entries is the 20th of August so you have plenty of time! My very good friend Bek is going to be judging with me, and we both love to read. So we are eagerly looking forward to your entries! 
Art (c) BushMaid
~*~*~*~
To Know Him
By BushMaid
~*~*~*~

When the day comes -
When we all rise:
I want to look
Deep in His eyes -

Open my mouth,
Let it be true -
Saying the words:
"Lord, I know you."
~
This artist is one of the most obscure Christian songwriters that I know of. In fact, for several of his songs, not even the lyrics exist on the web. (I know; I've looked) His songs are challenges; they ask deep questions that beg for answers. They are encouraging, uplifting, as well as faith building. I thought I would share with you one of my favourite songs by Dion, "Hearts Made of Stone". It reminds me of the many people who still feel this way.


Six word story time, and a wordle.


She wished things that were impossible.
~
Boredom is the absence of writing.
~
The silence was saying many things.
~
The growing weed strangled his heart.
~
The sunbeams shattered the crystal rainbow.
~
He couldn't tell confusion from reality.
~

~*~*~*~
Flame
By BushMaid
~*~*~*~

The flame flickered.  Yellow and orange, it danced merrily to a silent tune, casting bizarre shadows. Hints of sapphire blue flashed here and there, as the swaying golden flame wavered in the slight breeze.

He watched it, the fire burning clearly in his eyes. How he loved it. Passing his finger quickly through the flames, the fire licked at his skin; singeing, but not burning. It was beautiful, wild, untameable, and unstoppable.

Licking his lips, he bent forward and struck a match, the sudden burst of light exciting him as the match head slowly burned.

The pyromaniac grinned with delight.
~
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