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Six Word Stories - Four

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More Hemingways! Plus another Wordle.


His hand shook, sketching final details.
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It came from the pen holder.
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The poison drink swirled around temptingly.
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No one saw the sniper's rifle.
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The alien's glassy eyes turned cold.
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The ring glittered on her finger.
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  1. Road to GrinnellJune 9, 2011 at 12:46 PM

    I like number 1 & 3 best. :D Number one, especially, makes me curious about what he was drawing and why it was so important. I'm almost getting a fairytale feel... one of those Rumpelstiltskin-type tales, "Draw me the impossible or something nasty will happen."

    Sorry, writer's brain deviating. :) I like the third one because of the implied moral of temptation.

    I like the Wordle, too!

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  2. Jasmine RuigrokJune 9, 2011 at 4:39 PM

    Thankyou so much for commenting, Philly! I'm glad you enjoyed these. I love hearing what the Hemingway invokes in your imagination. I can see how you get that feel from it, too. :)

    Thanks! I got the Wordle idea from you! :D

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