tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7755209147403169584.post3326609216692834567..comments2020-11-24T23:25:08.346+11:00Comments on Jasmine Ruigrok: Ode to the Moon - PoemJasmine Ruigrokhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01976708690026168727noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7755209147403169584.post-88093392599050964152011-03-13T09:13:13.509+11:002011-03-13T09:13:13.509+11:00Thanks Bek! I'm glad you liked it! I liked the...Thanks Bek! I'm glad you liked it! I liked the pics too, I found those nice ones after scouring the web. :DJasmine Ruigrokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01976708690026168727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7755209147403169584.post-2609138407572487142011-03-12T18:09:34.510+11:002011-03-12T18:09:34.510+11:00That was lovely! And I really like the pics! :)That was lovely! And I really like the pics! :)Bek Dodwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08527782421612884924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7755209147403169584.post-20182550175122887612011-03-10T22:33:54.366+11:002011-03-10T22:33:54.366+11:00Thanks Jonathan. Hrm... yes, the "thee" ...Thanks Jonathan. Hrm... yes, the "thee" kind of puts a twist in the rhyme, doesn't it? I may have to tweak that when I can think of another line that fits what it's trying to say.Jasmine Ruigrokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01976708690026168727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7755209147403169584.post-70202267109196300842011-03-10T22:19:08.034+11:002011-03-10T22:19:08.034+11:00Very nice. The only line that didn't work for ...Very nice. The only line that didn't work for me is "Are there others who gaze on thee?" since the use of "thee" feels out of place.Jonathan Garnerhttp://jonathangarner.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com